Which Title Works?

Michael · Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2012 6:15 am Post subject: Which Title Works?

If any...

I've picked up my old NaNoWriMo from 2006 and am thinking of turning it into an eBook for the Kindle. (Just to see what happens.)

The Title is: Pepperoni, Extra Murder
I'm considering: Pepperoni, Extra Death

Which do you think has a better sound to it?

Or might you have a better suggestion?

Brief Synopsis: When a routine pizza delivery turns deadly, everybody thinks the driver did it. But his story just doesn't ring true. Is he admitting to a crime he didn't commit to get the attention he so desperately craves? The feuding romanciers - a relationship advice columnist and a late night love songs dj - both have a reason to find out.
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Black · Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2012 6:17 am Post subject:

The title sounds great, though if you were to change it, I'd would have it as:

Pepperoni with extra murder.

Niteshade007 · Posted: Mon Jan 30, 2012 6:40 pm Post subject:

Prefer murder, unless of course it turns out to not be murder, in which case that's kind of a *beep* to the reader

Michael · Posted: Mon Jan 30, 2012 8:10 pm Post subject:

I guess I picked it to begin with for a reason!
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Black · Posted: Tue Jan 31, 2012 3:07 am Post subject:

Kristev · Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2012 12:09 am Post subject:

Extra murder.
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Jamie · Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2012 4:20 am Post subject:

Did anything ever come of this?

Michael · Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2012 10:00 am Post subject:

Why, do you want to read it? Smile

Thanks for asking... After editing a few chapters I realized that the book is horribly written and needs A LOT of work. So it's back to the back burner.

I'm also trying to finish up my murder mystery party game, "(Who's Buried) Under the Big Top". I get emails constantly from people who've played my "Sour Grapes of Wrath" game and want to play more. But of course when I say "trying to fish up" I really mean "hoping it will finish itself"... lol. I work on it every once in awhile. I think part of the problem is that I'm retrofitting an old game I wrote to a new format. I should start working on something new. I've wanted to do a Halloween themed mystery for a long time. One of these days...
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Jamie · Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2012 11:20 am Post subject:

Just got myself a Kindle and wondered if it was available. Very Happy